Meh new story

I'm thinking of starting work on a comic about the adventures of a young fish and her friends, collecting gems to defeat evil or something like that...
Flowercoral is a young girl, a colourful little tropical fish living in the Capricorn section of the Great Barrier Reef. When evil strikes, she was separated from her friends and family, and ended up escaping into the heart of the Barrier Reef, where evil has not yet reached and was still prosperous. On her journey there, Flowercoral met a little boy named Whoo Hoo, a plastic toy whale who was accidentally dumped into the ocean by his careless young owner. Flowercoral told Whoo Hoo the whole story, and they travelled together for their lives. During the journey, Flowercoral looked after the little ankle-biter like her own little brother. At the Cairns section of the reef, nobody believed what the two told them about the 'coming of evilness', and thought they were mad. A young mohawk rebel, Golden Retriever, thought that at the beginning as well, until on one occasion, discovered the secret of the Gems along with Flowercoral and Whoo Hoo. The three decided that it was their time to act. As Flowercoral and Goldie got to know each other better, the young girl began to feel affection for him. Motivated by the power of friendship, team spirit and the strong connection they had between one another, the trio sets out on an adventure, up the river deep into the Daintree, and out into the vastness of the Pacific to the East. But evilness looms... Will merely three kids be powerful enough to defeat such strong forces? What will happen to their homeland?...
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